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Forbidden love


From behind the mask you admired me a while
Then you felt the urge to get close to my smile
You reached out your hand and locked me in a dance
Giving me willingly heart filled with romance


Forbidden love awoke
Destiny was to be provoked
Before the poison would steal you
I'll make your fairy tale come true


I've waited on the balcony but they saw me
They knew I longed every night for you only
They guarded me 'till the morning's sun
But you had to
                        RUN!
                        RUN!


Forbidden love was in bloom
So much 'till we'll meet our doom
Before the blade will meet my vein
I won't let our love to be born in vain


We'll find the way to overcome the obstacles
We'll find the way to overcome the fate
We'll be together now and ever after
Even when it'll be too late


Forbidden love's about to fail
We're about to meet our final day
The poison and the dagger shall reunite us
Off to the paradise...


Let's cherish our first and last night alone
The peril is at close
Let all your anxiety begone
The time slows...




Come on in
Don't make a sound
Everyone else is fast asleep...




©2008-2009 ~hopelesswriter
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omg I thought I won't be able to write again. I don't have my muse anymore...
anyways.
this one should be entitled "Romeo and Juliet" because it is fully based on this drama. All credits to Shakespeare. I just changed the form. The story line is as he created it. No happy ending.
Life's a pain :(
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i knew what it was based on just reading it. awesome! you got your point and idea across very well. i love it!

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thank you. I'm fully satisfied with it now :)

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impossible... again... well, I'm sure it'll work out. we'll do something about it. even if it is impossible according to the rules set out by the noble angels... we don't care 'cause we're idiots.
To było świetne! :D Pasowałoby jako opening do któregoś z lepszych anime (Kojarzy mi się z FMA) :D

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Can you tell the difference between the man and beast...?
O tym nie myslalam... :D

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impossible... again... well, I'm sure it'll work out. we'll do something about it. even if it is impossible according to the rules set out by the noble angels... we don't care 'cause we're idiots.
:D Słowa z openingów tego anime sa o podobnej tematyce... Ale twój wiersz jest lepszy tekstowo ;)

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Can you tell the difference between the man and beast...?
Oi, za bardzo mi pochlebiasz... :blush:

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impossible... again... well, I'm sure it'll work out. we'll do something about it. even if it is impossible according to the rules set out by the noble angels... we don't care 'cause we're idiots.
Heh, alez skąd! :)

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Can you tell the difference between the man and beast...?
Dziękuję :)

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impossible... again... well, I'm sure it'll work out. we'll do something about it. even if it is impossible according to the rules set out by the noble angels... we don't care 'cause we're idiots.

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